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Findings: Materials: Readability
The documents, as whole, are difficult
to read. The handout from the
September 25, 2001 meeting falls at a 14th grade reading level,
evaluated using an adapted Fry formula.
The guidelines at the end, perhaps
the most important section of the whole document as they give instructions
for safe water use, could be improved by rephrasing. Instead
of sentences, as from the HEALTH handout, directions, as in the
PUD advisory printed in the Woonsocket Call, such as DO
and DO NOT can lead to better compliance. Additionally, the
guidelines here have the same content, but are expressed in a different
way than the guidelines residents were exposed to in the newspapers
and in mailings from the PUD. Presenting the advisory guidelines
in the same format each time would make it easier for residents
to understand and follow them.
Different forms of the water
use advisories:
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Handout
Advisory
"HEALTHs
advisories, listed below, help you in two ways: they limit
your exposure to MTBE and they help prevent drawing more MTBE
contamination into the wells by promoting water conservation.
* Use bottled water for drinking, cooking, infant formula,
ice, preparing food or beverages, toothbrushing and bathing
children who may swallow the water.
* Reduce exposure to MTBE fumes: use good ventilation or fans
when bathing, showering, washing dishes or other similar activities.
Keep bathing times brief or take sponge baths.
* Reduce overall water use: use laundromats, stop all outdoor
water use, use water conservation devices, take brief showers
or sponge baths, use paper plates and cups
* Preventing Problems in the Future
Protect your water supply from contamination. Learn about
potential sources of contamination and help your community
keep the drinking water safe and clean.
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PUD/Call
Advisory
WATER
DO'S AND DON'TS
What's Not Okay
Drinking
the water
Using
water for cooking
Brushing
your teeth
Using
water in areas without ventilation
Drying
clothes without proper ventilation
What's
Okay:
Bathing,
as long as the room is well-ventilated, not steamy
Washing
dishes, also only if the room is well-ventilated
Washing
clothes (Be sure to dry them outside or in a properly vented
dryer)
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The handout gives a lot of information
with closely printed text; it overwhelms the reader and discourages
from careful reading. The design of this document
on the web provides for more ease of reading than the does the
document in its handout form. Though the material is the same, the
larger print and greater spacing allow for easier reading
and comprehension.
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What
information was most important for people to know?
- what
water uses should be avoided
- what
water uses were okay
- why
these restrictions were in place
- how
long these water use restrictions would be in effect
- where
residents could go with questions or concerns
- how they would be updated on the status of the water use restrictions
What
other information was beneficial but not central to the other messages?
- how
the contamination happened
- how
officials were responding to the contamination
- what
residents could do to prevent future contaminations
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